A Croissant for Breakfast (and a review!)

I have just received the first professional review for my upcoming book. This one is from Diane Donovan, Senior Reviewer for Midwest Book Review and Editor of Donovan’s Literary Services. I’m very pleased! Here it is:

All the Bodies Do is a novel about ghosts, secrets, and murder that is based on true crime events: in 2022, drought exposed skeletons at Lake Mead.

Investigative journalist Kate Temperance here seeks to link these bodies to crime lord Giancarlo Gemelli, but the threat doesn’t stem directly from him alone. His ruthless daughter Sofia Gemelli is the real challenge, confronting Kate’s every effort to reveal the truth with her determination to keep these secrets buried in the lake.

This might include Kate herself, if she’s not careful.

William J. Cook evolves a cat-and-mouse game that embraces not just these two characters, but bigger-picture thinking revolving around a situation that dovetails with Kate’s confrontations in her own circle of supporters:

“It’s just that I feel terrible for abandoning you like that. That’s not what friends do.”
“You did what you had to do to protect your family. I understand.”

Kate changes plans, changes locks, and changes the values in her life as her case reveals new threats from directions she never saw coming.

Readers might not expect the setting to move around as quickly as Kate does, but as she journeys between Las Vegas and Oregon to tackle threads of underlying influences and deceptions, the wine industry also becomes a spark point of contention as the murder probe becomes complicated.

Cook’s ability to weave these seemingly disparate threads of connection into a bigger-picture feel creates a vivid thriller that proves thoroughly engrossing not just for its perhaps-predictable confrontations between reporter and crime family, but for its satisfyingly less predictable revelations about life values and what it takes to absorb the truth about lies, spies, and threats.

Libraries seeking thrillers that sizzle with action and psychological twists will find both qualities make All the Bodies Do thoroughly engrossing—perhaps because its roots lie in real-world events.

Arriving Soon on Platform One…

At last, the pre-order of the Kindle version of All the Bodies Do is available! Just click on the image above to shop now. Kindle and paperback editions will be published on June 28th. Until then, you can pre-order the Kindle one at the reduced price of $2.99. After its release, the price will be $5.99.

This novel has certainly been a labor of love, from doing research in Las Vegas, to the extensive exploration of the ins and outs of wine-making at Willamette Valley Vineyards. (Okay, my research included substantial wine-tasting, but I had to take one for the team!)

I must give a big shout-out to Jette Rainwater, Winery Ambassador at WVV, who didn’t turn me in to the FBI (thank goodness!) and did provide substantial help with vineyard and wine-making details. Also, kudos to Roslyn McFarland for cover design and creation. And hugs and kisses to my darling daughter Julie, who insisted that I write this story in the first place.

No, All the Bodies Do is not the next great American novel, but I think it is a fine entertainment, and I hope you will, too.

Coming This Summer!

Lake Mead is surrendering its dead. As its waters recede in the throes of a relentless drought, bodies once underwater are emerging on its shores. They appear, they’re discovered, they give up the ghosts they’ve been hiding for decades. Family secrets long buried—the affairs and adulteries, the lies and the scandals, even the murders—are one day revealed. No sins can remain covered forever. They all rise to the surface. All the bodies do.

Welcome to a thriller inspired by real-life events in the summer of 2022, when the skeletal remains of several bodies were discovered on the drought-ravaged shores of Lake Mead. Investigative journalist Kate Temperance is determined to prove they were victims of crime boss Giancarlo Gemelli—or die trying. Standing in her way is Sofia Gemelli, Giancarlo’s daughter, a woman as ruthless as she is beautiful. She will do anything, even kill, to prevent Temperance from uncovering her family’s dark secrets. The story will take you from the frenzy of the Las Vegas Strip to the tranquility of Oregon’s Willamette Valley, where the secret to making world-class Pinot Noir is killing the competition. 

This summer, join Kate in her unrelenting pursuit of the truth!

Book Review: Anna O by Matthew Blake

True confession—I should have heeded that overused warning: “Don’t start this book before you go to bed. It will keep you up all night.” Last week I was awake at three o’clock one morning, immersed in Blake’s page-turner. Yikes!

What a brilliant premise! A young woman is found asleep in a remote cabin in the woods with a bloody knife in her hands. In the cabin next door are her two best friends, murdered in their beds. When the police arrive, the woman doesn’t wake up, a victim of the mental health malady “Resignation Syndrome,” the post-traumatic result of having witnessed (or participated in) something so horrifying that her mind has withdrawn from the world and retreated into itself. She is kept alive in an institution for four years until Amnesty International demands that the hospital release her on grounds of “inhumane treatment” or awaken her to stand trial for murder. Psychologist Benedict Prince must find a way to unlock her terrifying secrets and wake her up.

This novel has special resonance with me, since I had worked as a psychotherapist before my retirement. I follow Blake down the rabbit holes of the mind. I’m ensnared in the web he so artfully weaves. At times I find it hard to breathe. And now that I’m finished with the story, I am haunted by it. Read it at your own peril!

Book Review: Lessons in Chemistry by Bonnie Garmus

I think I’ve used this idea before, but it’s certainly true of this book. Lessons in Chemistry should come with a black box warning: THE AUTHOR ASSUMES NO LIABILITY FOR READERS WHO LOST SLEEP, SKIPPED WORK, FORGOT TO EAT, OR NEGLECTED CHILDCARE DUTIES BECAUSE THEY FELT COMPELLED TO CONTINUE READING NONSTOP. This novel is at once laugh-out-loud funny, disturbingly poignant, and spot-on in its acerbic observations of human nature and society.

Set in the late 50s and early 60s, it tells the tale of brilliant chemist, Elizabeth Zott, whose intellect and talent a male-dominated world refuses to acknowledge. After defending herself from sexual assault by the head of a university’s Science Department, she is summarily expelled from school without a degree. She lands a job at the Hastings Research Institute, where her original work “must be the product of the man she’s in love with,” and is ultimately stolen and published by another man. Along the way, she becomes pregnant “out-of-wedlock,” (in the eyes of her employer, a crime located somewhere between murder and kidnapping), and is fired immediately. Eventually, she winds up as the host of a cooking show on afternoon TV, Supper at Six, where, in addition to lecturing her female audience on the chemical composition of the foods and additives they so mindlessly ingest, she provides them with recipes for skewering the status quo.

Lessons in Chemistry is full of unforgettable characters, not the least of which are Six-Thirty, a German Shepherd who flunked out of the police academy’s bomb-sniffing squad, and “Mad” Zott, Elizabeth’s precocious child, the brainy bane of her Kindergarten teacher.

Author Garmus has written a novel as hilarious as it is heartbreaking, as entertaining as it is thought-provoking. If you haven’t read it already (per usual, I’m late out of the gate), start today! Then share it with someone you love.

Book Review: All the Light We Cannot See, by Anthony Doerr

I was very late in coming to this book, which already has more than 220,000 ratings on Amazon! As I’m sure you’re well aware, it’s an extraordinary novel, a work of art. Author Doerr paints and sculpts with words, creating unforgettable scenes with metaphors and similes that are often startling in the way they leap off the page. I sometimes felt I was in the presence of a word-magician, wondering, “How did he do that? How did he find those words for that event?”

The narrative follows the adventures of a blind teenage girl in Nazi-occupied France, whose museum-employed father has been entrusted to protect a large diamond, the Sea of Flames, from the invading German troops. He refuses to believe the legend of the stone’s curse: that it will provide its bearer with eternal life while all those associated with him will suffer terrible tragedy.

A parallel story is that of German adolescent Werner Pfennig, gifted with a genius for understanding and building radios, and conscripted into service to find those in the French resistance sending forbidden codes to the advancing American army.

The reader is challenged time and again by contradiction, as the author writes about the horrors of war in piercingly beautiful prose. Not only that, but the writer goes on to describe, in understated but heart-breaking terms, the posttraumatic stress coiled like a parasite in the minds of survivors for the rest of their lives.

Ultimately, the novel becomes a testament to human folly and the willful ignorance of world leaders and nations who believe that human problems can be solved on the battlefield.

Given the current state of affairs, I fear we may beat the tribal drums yet again and march our children off to fight another war with “the enemy”: other children whose mothers also nursed them and loved them and loosed them on the world.

Unfortunately, the old folk song still rings true: “Where have all the flowers gone?”

Happy Holidays!

I don’t pray as much as I should. One brief prayer I manage as soon as I awaken each morning is: “Thank you.” I know the older one gets, the more precarious good health becomes, and I want to be aware of how good I feel this morning. Right now. Amen.

More good health: It’s such a pleasure to write while listening to my wife painting in her studio. Her work in oil and cold wax requires a lot of scraping and layering and scraping again. The sounds are comforting, as are the clicks of my keyboard. They’re sounds of creation, birthing new works in paint and in print.

So with a heart full of gratitude, I want to thank my readers—my truly “extended family”—for your ongoing support and encouragement. May you all have a blessed holiday season and a healthy and happy New Year.

Project update: I have sent out 208 queries to literary agencies in the U.S., the U.K., and Canada. So far, I’ve received fifty rejections and two positive responses. An agent in London to whom I sent the first three chapters has requested the whole manuscript, and an agent in New York City to whom I sent the first ten pages has requested the next five chapters. Fingers crossed!

Finally, please accept this short story as a token of my appreciation. I know some of you have already read it. I wrote “Dangerous Christmas” fifteen years ago and included it in my 2017 collection of short stories entitled, Catch of the Day. I dusted it off this morning and was pleased to find that I still liked it. I hope you do, too.

A Progress Report

I want to update friends and family to the status of my current project, the novel All the Bodies Do. Since the story begins in Las Vegas, my wife wisely suggested we take a trip there for research. It was a wonderful idea because it lent more authenticity to my descriptions of the city and the surrounding desert. The picture above is the so-called “bathtub ring” around Lake Mead, left as the lake receded to its lowest level ever because of the megadrought here in the West. It’s white because of the calcium carbonate in the waters of the Colorado River.

By spring of 2022, water levels had dropped 176 feet, exposing the skeletal remains of bodies on shorelines that had previously been underwater. The most famous is “Hemenway Harbor Doe,” a dead body found in a fifty-gallon drum near the Hemenway boat launch and marina. As if being found in a barrel wasn’t enough to get it labeled as a homicide, there was a bullet hole in its skull! Below is a picture of Boulder Basin, the area where it was found.

This photo was taken from the Lake Mead Overlook outside of Boulder City, a place where tour buses and visitors stop. It was fun to watch people pose for pictures in front of this background. Since no mention is made of “Hemenway Harbor Doe” on the information posted here, my guess is that most didn’t know they were posing in front of a crime scene!

Finally, I took the picture below from our hotel room. That’s the famous Sphere, which just opened last Friday with a concert by U2. The Ferris wheel is called the High Roller, and it had been the highest in the world until 2021, when it was surpassed by one in Dubai.

The protagonist of my book, the investigative journalist Kate Temperance, will discover the identities of the bodies in Lake Mead—or die trying. Her adversary, Sofia Gemelli, owns the (fictional) Florentine Hotel and Casino on Las Vegas Boulevard. Kate’s investigation will take her from the Vegas Strip and the Nevada desert to the lush vineyards of the Willamette Valley in Oregon. My hope is that the twists and turns of the story will keep readers guessing and keep them turning pages long past their bed time!

The manuscript has had a thorough editing by my beta readers, and now that I’ve added my notes from our Las Vegas trip, I’ve begun to query agents to see if I can get it traditionally published. If I can’t connect with an agent within the next 8-10 months, I’ll go ahead and publish it independently. I’ll keep you apprised of this writer’s journey!